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confused
November 7, 2009
You never tell me you love me
Your never around
But when you are
I feel that your not here for me
Why can't you tell me what's wrong
Is it me?
Is it you?
Or is it us?
© Luke S., Montclair, NJ
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This article has 12 comments.
babygirl576 PLATINUM said...
on May. 15 2012 at 8:55 am
your never alone; it just seems like you are. Comment my poems
xXOneWishXx BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:07 pm
Your defiently not the only one, life jus sucks like that sometimes...but everyone gets through it eventually.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 2:50 pm
I like this poem and how you question to hint you're confused. Great poem. Come and check mind if you'd like. Thanks.
Snap Crackle Pop said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 6:39 pm
omg this is so sweet but its so true in life i love this one
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:47 pm
i liked it. it was good. check out some of my work please
mellow_melon PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 4:51 pm
i love the last three lines, because its like saying is it one of us thats the problem, or do we just not mix? well that was my interpretation haha but it was good! i thought it couldve flowed a little better in tee beginning but it was good, and i thought the way you ended it was very powerful
writerxchicx SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:36 am
I like that this is easy to relate to and it's simple. I think that everyone has been through this (I'm going through it now) which is great. I would have liked more emotion coming through but otherwise, great job!
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:52 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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