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Would anyone care.

October 20, 2009
By BrokenNickee BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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"Above all else, guard your heart, for everything you do flows from it." Proverbs 4:23 Although I am Agnostic so I usually don't see this stuff, but I saw that and felt it was absolutely true.

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If I were to die today,
Do you think my pain would fade away?
Or would it stay here lingering in the air,
Waiting for something or someone to care.
I think not of the pain of others,
But the pain I feel the pain that smothers.
I'm hurt inside and nobody cares,
But with the cuts on my wrist everyone's scared.
Physical pain makes up for the help I need,
I'm like a group of dancers with no one to lead.
I'm alone in this world don't you see,
All the pain I've inflicted on me.

© Gianna V., Sewell, NJ

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waiting... SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 7:46 pm
waiting... SILVER, Harvard, Illinois
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i thought this was a b.a. poem...