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Thunderstorm Battle

October 14, 2009
By wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!


Tiny droplets begin to rocket towards the ground
Like suicidal airmen
Outraged, their masters furiously clash,
Huge thunderclouds in the air!
They send down bright arrows to pin down their troops
The battle and confusion is in its height,
When a sudden savior comes to brighten the sky
She stretches and smiles
And all is well
Just another thunderstorm battle
Leaving glistening tears upon the Battlegrounds


The author's comments:
Of course, it was raining when I wrote this. But surprisingly, it was no thunderstorm!

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 1:24 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 255 comments

Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

Haha, I know! It is kkind of strange! I was surprised when I thought of it! Thanks!

on Jul. 7 2010 at 1:18 pm
Jane_P PLATINUM, San Clemente, California
25 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
When asked about race...

"Well, when I went to the bathroom I was Russian, and when I came out I was Finnish."

or, alternatively:

"Irish I could tell you."

I love the metaphor of the thunderstorm being like a battle. I've never thought about myself being under attack by the weather, but that's an interesting visual! Great job!