Stolen | Teen Ink


October 17, 2009
By yourbiggestfan BRONZE, Cudahy, California
yourbiggestfan BRONZE, Cudahy, California
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You stole it from me.
You took my only happiness,
my greatest hopes, my deepest desires.You've turned them into
horrible things.

I was too damn blinded by that fake
smile,those deep dimples,those eyes
that seemed to always shine, like a
million wild fires.

You stole it,you stole the things
that I wanted to share with you. I tried to share my love,my heart,my life.I should have know I was wasting my time, while you were handing out all your lies.

I wasted my time, I know that now. Unfortunately now it's too late. I was the only one seeing it the way I did, you had your laughs.I hope you're happy,because the image of 'us' will now disappear.

I will regain what you have stolen.
And I will never let you take them
from me again.

The author's comments:
I know it's not that good,but it's just my feeling right now. and no...I didn't lose my virginity.(that's what my mom thought when I let her read it hehe.)

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on Dec. 7 2009 at 9:35 pm
October_Moon GOLD, Maywood, California
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this was beautiful ah Nai i love it. u handed ur heart to someone who just shovd it back

on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:35 am
IgniteTheAirwaves PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." -J.D. Salinger, Catcher in the Rye

I think that this is good especially because it's not the traditional 'oh my boyfriend dumped me but i'll grow strong' type of poem found here. It's unique, and unique is good. :)

on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:13 pm
smalltownwrite210, Apex, North Carolina
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yeah its really good. but i dont really get what your talking about. haha but then again im kinda sloww.

ninian SILVER said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 4:25 pm
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
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i also thought it was good. i can see how your mom thought it was your virginity that got stolen... still really good

on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:51 pm
TwilightButterfly BRONZE, Jackson, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
I hate you but i love you at the same time

Even though you Don't think it is good I loved it. And it is sooo