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Nothing Other

October 16, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
Who is the lion in this circumstance?
It must be me,
for knowing from the very begining you would fall in love with me.
I should not ask myself if you are whats best for me, but, if I am whats best for you.
I try to explain this to you but,
everytime I notice how perfectly are hands fit together,
how you look into my eyes trying to find my soul,
Everytime I try to tell you that I am not what you need,
I myself get distracted by this illusion of love that I have made for you.
So surely I am the lion in this part of your life, and actually I would not want to be anything other.



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on Apr. 29 2010 at 3:13 pm
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."

This is beautiful I love it

on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:41 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is really pretty!!!! ~Nice allusion!!!~ It pulls ppl in when you use allusions, and I personally love em!!!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:22 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Every piece of your work that I have read so far I have been able to relate to my own life. It's fantastic when you can write so well that your descriptions can apply to most life stories while at the same time only applying to your own. Does that make sense?

on Feb. 19 2010 at 6:51 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

you must really love this guy you talk about in you work. you 2 are lucky. so far the only love i've ever seen are ones that only turn out to be lust. keep that love close to you.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 2:17 pm
Underestimated GOLD, Ocala, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every girl wants a guy she can go to hair a mess, in sweats, eyes red from crying, and the first thing he says to her is "baby your beautiful" and actually means it.

this deff reminds me of twlight but better, more interesting, you could become a amazing author i believe.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:53 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

awesome awesome :D

i keep wanting to read more of your stuff

on Jan. 26 2010 at 1:16 pm
ilovemath=) BRONZE, Frederic, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where there is love, there is life."

I agree with Carol she was right all of your work is good!

Carol BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:33 pm
Carol BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 33 comments
Absolutely amazing. You have such great imagination. Wow, all of your work is crazy good. :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:42 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This makes me think of Twilight, but with a wicked twist. It's brilliant. It's different. I love it.

WikdChick GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:25 pm
WikdChick GOLD, Shannon, Mississippi
11 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need a friend who changes when I change and who nods when I nod; my shadow does that much better.
When childhood dies, its corpses are called adults and they enter society, one of the politer names of hell. That is why we dread children; even if we love them, they show us the state of our decay.

this is my fav out of all ur poems

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:30 am
joshua buce SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
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i can relate to this, i just got out of a relationship like that.. at least i think it was.. the whole thing was confusing. but this poem is very sad. good job tho, i like it. check out my poem if you would.. i've only got one up right now, but i'l put much more up later. it just annoys me how long it takes for them to check it or w/e before they put it up.