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It's not on the Moon.

December 8, 2025
By IMFCKINCARSON BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
IMFCKINCARSON BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
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I walk amongst the hallowed grove,

Foretold by many tales, in many forms.

I see a shine of ocean’s hue

And i think:

That must be the earth. I gaze upon it from my very satellite

Like the 50’s lying radio shows of walking trout and sapphire ziggurats

This, too, must be a reimagining of our most faithful astrological companion,

An illusory past of an eden of rumpus animals 

Of fairy fire and ancient structures,

Oh joy!

Oh whimsy! I think,

above,

I leap five feet        and across,

And my eye catches


A flash of white

I revelation

The blue was simply a reflection, and environmental trick


It was never my home which I gazed upon, and i become

Grounded once again


not on the moon anymore


And though the jaguars still chase dogs under gaze of the baboons,

And the ocean’s waves are alight with blue algae,

And the magic still lives, and the fairy fire still flows, and there is no doubt in my mind that i could continue to jump as i do if i wanted to,

 

I am not on the moon anymore


And so i

Fall.


The author's comments:

This is an ekphrastic poem responding to Raqib Shaw's painting "paradise lost." The poem is inspired by a misunderstanding I had on my first viewing of the painting, as I believed the moon in the painting to be the earth because of it's blue tint. It expresses the disappointment I felt at realizing my interpretation was not only wrong, but based on a simple mis-sight.


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