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Drowning

October 28, 2025
By Anonymous

lingers like a goodbye kiss.

The water is your lover—

slowly fading in the distance.

It cradles you—

as tears flood your eyes

and the flood floods your tears—

and your arms are too weak—to protect you

from the storm.


As the pressure rises,

you hear—your ears pop,

you feel—Atlas’s burden drop

from your shoulders,

and the voices—in your head—stop.


You find light—in the darkness, 

breath—in the suffocation,

and as eternity consumes you,

you smile—and greet your one desire,

letting yourself be—at peace—

at last—


But your lover—is tapping you on the shoulder,

and He—just watches

so you—just watch

as the piranhas come closer.


And as they mark you—

you wonder if they smelled—the fear on your skin.


Maybe—there’s magic in you yet—

as you transform the water—into wine—

But—you can’t even die in peace—

They won’t even give you that


The author's comments:

Hi! I’m Siena, a current junior in high school (class of 2027). I love all art forms, including photography, graphic design, and—of course—poetry.


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on Jan. 1 at 12:37 pm
TrulySoapyy BRONZE, Saint Johns, Michigan
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~"we don't cry, my love. we bleed on paper."~

whoa. this is beautifully haunting.

on Jan. 1 at 10:54 am
cadenceshurtz BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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This is AMAZING. So descriptive, so well written, and fluid, and relatable! I feel like I was kind of losing myself in this poem while I was reading it. Absolutely wonderful! I look forward to reading more of your writing!

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Why fit in when you are born to stand out

I love it!

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abbybell7 BRONZE, Getzville, New York
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“The great gift of human beings is that we have the power of empathy.” — Meryl Streep

Beautiful work!