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Red Stilettos (after Tommye Blount)

April 27, 2023
By woorichoi BRONZE, Knoxville, Tennessee
woorichoi BRONZE, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Red Stilettos

          (after Tommye Blount) 


You once came home 

with red stilettos. 

The leather looked elegant, 


like Mrs. Brook’s little daughter. 

You had a pair of beautiful heels, 

the color as vibrant as her bloomed happiness


and the texture as soft as her new fur coat.

The heels thinner than a Barbie doll’s leg,

and the inner cloth of the shoe shining royal purple,


You looked beautiful in your red heels, 

absolutely beautiful.

Now those shoes lay in my closet,

 

 leather stained with dirt and pieces of grass,

its glamorous beauty rusty and ruined. 

Where have you gone?


The author's comments:

One of my favorite poems of all time, Black Umbrella by Tommye Blount, I wrote my own poem about a pair of red heels that my mother used to wear in her youth, modeling Blount's style. The red stilettos described in my work were the very first and last pair of fancy shoes that my mother ever wore. With it containing all of my mother's fantasies and dreams as a young girl, they now remain in my closet, untouched and ruined. Through my poem, Red Stilettos, I wanted to romanticize my mother's youth and her ambitions with an object that she is closely connected to. 


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