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The Vows

December 5, 2022
By 609150 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
609150 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
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My dream. 

I’m watching you walk down the aisle because you’re the one.

Our love is like a ray of sunlight after a storm.

Nothing has ever clicked like the love I have for you.

I love you as penguin mates do, but let's not waddle away.


I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health.

Know that communication is important like the roots of a tree.

I promise to kiss you in the rain,

slow dance with you in our kitchen.

And every now and then make you breakfast in bed like sweet couples do.


I loved you then and I love you now.

You’re the one I’m going to love ‘til death do us part. 

You’re the milk to my cereal.

The one I want to share my life with.

I look at you and say “I do”.


The author's comments:

I wanted to see if I can convert vows into a Poem, for practice. Someday I would like to make a poem for my future Partner at our wedding.


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