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Emotions along with Commotion

November 24, 2022
By fatema-noor SILVER, East Elmhurst, New York
fatema-noor SILVER, East Elmhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak a good word or remain silent"- Prophet Muhammad (peace be upon him)

When my eyes gaze at her, 

I am brimmed with emotions

All that fills my mind is commotion


A feeling of awe 

Fear out of respect,

as the preserver of the Words of our Rabb

 as the scholar strolls across the land of the Most Merciful


An ideal example of commitment 

Providing us with the such treatment 


As the knowledge of this Deen is explicitly serene

Preserved by the ‘Ulama 

Fear of Fahsha’

Carrying the light of the Qur’aan in her heart

Even after the scholar departs 


Behold, as the angels descend from the heavens to listen to her heart trembling recitation


The walls of the classroom crumble to dust from concentration


Such a status given to those,

To those who dedicate their lives to the Deen of Allah

Such an honor

That can truly be seen within her


Like the deep ocean she is 

Such grace, yet much more to discover

The more you know, the more you love her

The author's comments:

Through the immense, indescribable amount of love and awe which my heart instills for those who shape me the way I am through knowledge.

This poem focuses on  the religion I accept, Islam and my relationship with my teachers through  Islam.



In this poem:

- Rabb refers to "Lord" in Arabic.

- 'Ulama refers to the scholars.

- 'Fahsha refers to shamelessness due to sin.

- Deen refers to religion.

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