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Challenger Deep

May 31, 2022
By lmartin2427 BRONZE, Hudsonville, Michigan
lmartin2427 BRONZE, Hudsonville, Michigan
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The captain goes down with his ship

The lover goes down with his heart

The friend goes down with their foe

The failure goes down from the start

The strong one goes down when he’s weak

The weak one goes down when he’s strong

This ship I was destined to pilot

Has been going down all along

Captain, my friend, you knew something

I wished I could never have known

For though I’ve only felt fragments

This world you had built is mine own


The author's comments:

Challenger Deep by Neal Shusterman is one of my favorite books, but it took years before I truly felt like I could relate to the main character once I experienced struggles of my own.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Jun. 10 2022 at 11:10 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Challenger Deep is one of my favourite books too and I really love Caden's character as it feels so relatable...That's why I got attracted to the title of this poem...
BTW, I love this poem too...You've put great effort into making it a wonderful one...Keep writing!!!✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻