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Love As ' A Deer Getting Hit By Car'

April 26, 2022
By AprilR BRONZE, Lake Havasu City, Arizona
AprilR BRONZE, Lake Havasu City, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"It's all mirror, mirror on the wall because beauty is power the same way money is power the same way a gun is power."


Headlights blinding bright,

            Staring at the sun except it’s slowly getting closer.

                                    An impeding catalyst

                                that they can only watch

            It’s standing in the street,

                        stopped at the yellow stripe like

        it’s the finishing line.

                    ‘CONGRATS YOU’RE OUR WINNER’

            First place meet blinding light.

Eyes wide, staring out from the spotlight

                    “Center stage, awaiting impact.”

                Long legs, stilted and bent out, 

barely         holding up its weight,

                                    shaking like the 

                                    hands on the steering

wheel.

    The foot doesn’t move off the gas pedal,

                        The steering wheel         isn’t being 

yanked

                                To the side.

The deer remains in place,         hope and trusting more than it should.

                It’s stuck to the pavement,     old gum dried and crusted to the road.

                Both sides maintain nonsensical hope the other 

                                        will give up at the last 

second.

Brakes screech. Earth hits sun. Gold medal cracked in half. Curtain falls.


No more hoping, no more anything.


The author's comments:

Love is something that can hurt and traumatize anyone and this poem uses a deer getting hit by a car as a representation of that.


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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 11 2022 at 3:16 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

I love the representation!!! And you've a unique writing style...👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻