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Commodal Love

February 28, 2022
By Rodpoet22 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
Rodpoet22 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Love is something to be avoided
Much like the men’s bathroom
Your partner’s perfume is nauseating, like the stench of ammonia from urine on the floor Public signs of affection like holding hands looks appalling, like when you open up the stall to find an unflushed brown and yellow surprise
The sound of kissing is disgusting, like a wet fart
Love is absolutely disgusting, and something to be avoided


The author's comments:

This was part of a class assignment where we had to write about love and comparing it to something else. I immediately thought of comparing it something negative and nothing is more loathful than the men's bathroom.


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