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Backyard Tree

January 28, 2022
By jensenkh1220 BRONZE, Smithtown, New York
jensenkh1220 BRONZE, Smithtown, New York
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I love that old pine in my backyard

Its huge and blows around like a carwash tube man in the wind,

but it always stays up and sturdy

I wonder what makes it stay so strong

Even its little side branches coming off of the main trunk don't seem to snap in a storm ever,

as much as they flail and spin 


I wish I could be like that in a way and be able to just stand strong

Not let myself get so easily snapped and twisted around by some wind


I think I just heard a branch snap and fall into the leaf litter below

Maybe I was wrong


The author's comments:

My name is Jensen, and I'm currently taking Creative Writing at my school. I wrote this poem partially inspired by my teacher, laying in bed one night. I looked out my window and saw a huge pine tree in my yard swaying with the wind hyperbolically.


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on Jan. 28 2022 at 8:17 pm
SomehowElly BRONZE, Florence, Massachusetts
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