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Cinematic Orchestra (an acrostic)

October 7, 2021
By EmmaWood BRONZE, Papillion, Nebraska
EmmaWood BRONZE, Papillion, Nebraska
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There was a house we crafted from

Our joys and desperation. Now, floorboards are splintered from our


Blubbering tears, and window sills are packed

Under layers of our depression. The wood we thought would last forever, no longer

Indestructible. Where the

Land brimmed with discussion, a

Dark hush has fallen from time and tragedy. There was a house that

 

Accumulated light dropped from our smiles, 


Held the delicacy within its walls. That loyal gleam lingered with me, until it

Obligingly left with my deft betrayal. 

The silence following my absence

Makes every corner ache. The

Entrails of our life encased in shrouded stillness.


The author's comments:

This poem was inspired by the song "To Build A Home" by Cinematic Orchestra. This piece is a response to the song and told from another perspective. The song ends in a very hopeful way, the person coming back home and finding the place still standing, but I had always taken the ending as being very bitter-sweet. I tried to convey this melancholy feeling through the poem.


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