Eighteen Candles | Teen Ink

Eighteen Candles

June 6, 2021
By joliesmith BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
joliesmith BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Tangy tears raced

Down my painted-pink cheeks,

As the candles

Withered to wax

How did you forget

My 18th birthday?

I would’ve taken any

Bouquet of roses from

Your hands,

Even with broken petals

Or any sign that you still cared

But I’m sure that

When a certain Kayla

Has her birthday

You’ll lay cherry blossoms

At her feet

And I’ll carry my dead branches

Back home.


The author's comments:

This poem is about a guy I used to have a crush on. On my eighteenth birthday, everyone wished me a happy birthday...except for him. It really hurt me, and that was how this poem was born. This is one of the best poems I've ever written, in my humble opinion, and I feel like many people can relate to it.


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