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Please

May 5, 2021
By Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
147 articles 41 photos 1014 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me


Be aware of another

Be aware of me

Please

Your sweet, painful hug

Will serve another exile good.

Take care of another,

Kind and alone

Under a caving sky,

Please.


The author's comments:

The meaning of this poem is that whatever you're looking for in life, nothing really matters except loving God and loving your neighbor as yourself.


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on May. 29 2021 at 8:56 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

well i put up a (fictional) suicide note. it actually ended happy.
but I don't know, on one hand it would be terrfiing to read someones final words, on the other, it would be disrespectful to deny them. ti does get personal info, they would probably be to late.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 29 2021 at 8:28 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
147 articles 41 photos 1014 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

Yeah you prolly can't publish suicide notes....too creepy.

on May. 28 2021 at 9:55 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

O_O
i thought it was a suicide note at first.

tho it does remind me of my (religious) headcanon, that all good boils down to a root motive of love, and all evil to fear. think about it. greed is a fear of not having enough, hate is a fear of... well there are a lot of reasons why you hate someone, I guess its contextual. really if you disect any emotion then at its core is either love or hate.