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A Chill

April 29, 2021
By WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


My pain scatters,

Piercing the bone,

Chilling my heart.

I want to be good,

But I can't be.

All hope is lost,

But I won't give in.

The battle I fight,

Is one I must do alone.

For I fight myself,

The dark side of me,

So listen close.

Remember me,

But I mustn't let,

Anyone in.


The author's comments:

This piece is about that feeling of hopelessness where you think you alone must fight that battle and it's not to make you sad but remind people that when your being mean, think about those less fortunate and remember that some people are hurting and you may be hurting that person.


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on May. 7 at 7:23 am
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

@wondermahima Thanks! I work hard on these and I really appreciate the comments

on May. 7 at 6:15 am
wondermahima BRONZE, Chennai, Other
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Dare to Dream Big.

Your writings are so deep and cool!

on May. 5 at 12:51 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Yeah, it can be

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 5 at 12:44 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
103 articles 31 photos 805 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

Yer right in saying that the biggest enemy you often to have to face is yerself.

on May. 4 at 7:36 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks for the advice, I will take that into mind.

on May. 4 at 2:10 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
179 articles 22 photos 969 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"

cool, you actually know what your writing abt and why(:
it is rly cool tho. maybe rephrase the last lines, its somewhat confusing when the end should be the most powerful and well worded part.