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our melodies

April 11, 2021
By Anonymous

you left like a melody

like the final note of a song

about a lost love

the kind that leaves imprints on 

the soul of the listener


since you’ve been gone,

your melody hasn’t left my mind… 


you warned us all

too quietly for anyone to hear

rewind


if only I had known you

I would have heard

because I always do

rewind


I tend to pick up these things,

no matter how passive,

because it reminds me of myself

rewind


how can people be so oblivious?

rewind


you thought the same as I do

we could’ve been such good friends

rewind


you were exactly like me

rewind


my melody is still messy

scribbled

scrawled

erased

annotated

ripped

crumpled

stained by tears

covered in doodles

tainted with fear

incomplete

waiting to be finished and sung

 

and so was yours

eject tape


The author's comments:

I wrote this about a month after hearing about the death of someone my age.  I never knew them; I'd never even heard of them.  But the way everyone talked made it seem like a suicide.  To this day, I'm still uncertain of what actually happened, but it affected me deeply in the moment.  I cried in the middle of class, and wrote a poem to the victim.  A while later, I wrote this one, still thinking about them.  

I wrote this poem thinking about how our lives and experiences are a bit like melodies that make each of our stories unique and beautiful.  Many people's melodies (like mine) are still incomplete, messy, and just not quite right yet.  I want to inspire other kids like me to keep writing no matter how impossible it may seem.


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