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our melodies
you left like a melody
like the final note of a song
about a lost love
the kind that leaves imprints on
the soul of the listener
since you’ve been gone,
your melody hasn’t left my mind…
you warned us all
too quietly for anyone to hear
rewind
if only I had known you
I would have heard
because I always do
rewind
I tend to pick up these things,
no matter how passive,
because it reminds me of myself
rewind
how can people be so oblivious?
rewind
you thought the same as I do
we could’ve been such good friends
rewind
you were exactly like me
rewind
my melody is still messy
scribbled
scrawled
erased
annotated
ripped
crumpled
stained by tears
covered in doodles
tainted with fear
incomplete
waiting to be finished and sung
and so was yours
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I wrote this about a month after hearing about the death of someone my age. I never knew them; I'd never even heard of them. But the way everyone talked made it seem like a suicide. To this day, I'm still uncertain of what actually happened, but it affected me deeply in the moment. I cried in the middle of class, and wrote a poem to the victim. A while later, I wrote this one, still thinking about them.
I wrote this poem thinking about how our lives and experiences are a bit like melodies that make each of our stories unique and beautiful. Many people's melodies (like mine) are still incomplete, messy, and just not quite right yet. I want to inspire other kids like me to keep writing no matter how impossible it may seem.