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Falling in Love

January 14, 2020
By susan123 BRONZE, Palm Desert, California
susan123 BRONZE, Palm Desert, California
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Its hard not to

fall in love 

with someone

when 

they understand

your deepest 

and darkest 

thoughts

when 

they see all

the different 

parts of your 

soul

when 

its three a.m

and they call

because

they know you're not

ok


The author's comments:

This is a poem about a current relationship that i am in


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tsvkiix BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2020 at 8:24 pm
tsvkiix BRONZE, Hong Kong, Other
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beautiful. i hope everyone finds love <3

on Nov. 20 2020 at 9:34 am
Leonafuerte BRONZE, Reford, Michigan
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This is literally such an amazing depiction of how easily i can fall in love just because of the little things that show someone cares.

Chantal2021 said...
on Oct. 21 2020 at 7:35 pm
Chantal2021, Ewing, New Jersey
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This poem is moving because it explains all the aspects a person fell in love with about the other, it displays true love and caring at its finest.

20240082 said...
on Oct. 15 2020 at 8:23 am
20240082, Ewing, New Jersey
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Powerful poem. love is strong and if you feel that strongly about someone then i guess its love.

emmypoppert said...
on Oct. 12 2020 at 1:56 pm
emmypoppert, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
- "Don't judge me you only see what I choose to show you."
- "If you can't get somebody off your mind, they are probably supposed to be there."
- "Why am I so afraid to lose you when you are not even mine."
- "Sometimes your heart cries, while your eyes are dry. And I think that's just the worst feeling."

omg I love this I wished someone loved me like this :(

on Aug. 11 2020 at 5:27 am
Princessknightrachael, Lagos, Other
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Favorite Quote:
never give up,
love conquerors all,
good always wins the bad

wow lovely reminds me of my first crush apart from the calls by 3. keep it up 😍😍👍👍👍

on Jul. 12 2020 at 1:27 am
GirlyGamerForever3, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love can walk through fire without blinking.

I've had this with someone, where they'd know I wasn't okay, and they'd call me. I had it with my boyfriend, and my OSB.

on Jun. 17 2020 at 5:12 am
Riddikulus BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
it is our choices that show what we truly are far more than our abilities
- professor Dumbledore

it's a heartwarming poem and I hope that your relationship was successful

on Apr. 30 2020 at 11:36 am
acressley2024, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
A body at rest stays at rest, A body in motion stays in motion.

Means alot

on Apr. 29 2020 at 1:12 pm
Arcademachine101, Chicago, Illinois
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very touching I LIKE IT
great job :)