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Green Oak Trees

October 24, 2019
By royraymondj71 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
royraymondj71 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
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Three kids bike on the street in front of me.

I am sitting on my porch,

large brick pillars beside me,

towering over the street.


Two cars sit in the driveway,

Twins.

Two glimmering beasts:

Fire and ice, red and blue.

Shiny in the September sunlight.


A breath of fresh air.

I feel calm,

Relaxed,

On this September day.

 

I walk down the block,

green oak trees towering over me,

like the pillars I once sat at.


The author's comments:

This poem evolved from a draft I originally wrote from sitting on my porch. I wanted to include  visual imagery and detail to show the reader exactly what I saw in an interesting way.


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