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The Shift

January 28, 2019
By charlottebell SILVER, Ben Lomond, California
charlottebell SILVER, Ben Lomond, California
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The morning is coming

Dew dripping down the window

Hunger saying “hurry up”

Birds heard chirping in the trees

 

Eyes on me; wondering

Calculating what I will do today

An undeclared life

dream-cut

Headlong into the dark sky

 

I drive in my car to the blue sea

The waves whisper and crash

while the sun gives its testimony

Reborn sweet and salty, it raises in the sky

 

The buttery smell wafts through the air

I shudder at the idea of what was left behind

This change will be good, I think

Shivering, I feel the serrated blade,

and see myself walk away


The author's comments:

This piece was written using a very specific technique. A writer makes a list of sensuous language and descriptions, then flips through a book to find verbs, and creates a poem from that. This took many drafts, but I am proud of this piece as it hopefully leaves the audience quite intrigued.


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