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Cold Water

January 24, 2019
By auberry612 BRONZE, West Hartford, Connecticut
auberry612 BRONZE, West Hartford, Connecticut
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I slowly turn the switch-

For a second nothing happens,

But soon the temperature falls.

Cold water hits me like a fastball of ice-

Maybe I’ve made a mistake here?

For a second I am shocked,

But soon I become more alert.


It keeps my hair healthier

It keeps my colors crisp

Even if I want warmth on my chest-

So I sustain this frenemy, even though

Staying like this doesn’t feel the best.

I lean away, my body hunched;

Only my hair touches it

So I don’t freeze too much.

But still- do I really want this?


Eventually I make the decision:

My hair’s all washed,

I don’t have to deal

With this cold anymore.

So I indulge in the heat.

I go from a slap to a hug

And suddenly I’ve switched-

Water flows everywhere except my head.

I don’t have to worry anymore.


The author's comments:

I took a creative writing class this year and all of us created our own poems and workshopped them. This is a poem I made in class, and I still hope to improve my writing. This poem has to do (more literally) with doing things you don't want to to show willpower-- like using cold water instead of hot during a shower. It also metaphorically can deal with cutting off a toxic friendship and spending time with different people. I've had to do both, and even though I didn't want to do either thing, it's what I had to do. 


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