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sleeping

January 3, 2019
By kristenkey BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
kristenkey BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I find myself getting lost in the sound of you sleeping.

The quick heavy breaths in

and the long breaths out.

Not quite loud enough to be a snore.

I can’t see you through the black screen

but I know your lips are parted,

your hands are under the pillow,

and your hair is a mess.

I can’t feel you through the black screen

but I know your whole body is warm

except the tip of your nose.

I don’t have to be a mind reader to know that you’re thinking of me as you sleep.

These things are intangible.

Just my imagination.

However, I can hear you sleep.

And it sounds like home.


The author's comments:

This poem is about falling asleep on Facetime with my boyfriend. I wrote it one night when he fell asleep before me.


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on Jan. 15 2019 at 6:08 am
owenfreeman16, Raleigh, North Carolina
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one of the best pieces of writing i’ve ever read
10/10 would recommend