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Rain

November 18, 2018
By brandonburke BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
brandonburke BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
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The first of the season

is met with excitement

The air fills with an aroma that can only be described as

the smell of the first of the season


It begins by coming once every couple weeks

But as September rolls on

It is expected with each passing week


Still a bit of excitement and comfort

comes with each day that it falls

Drifting off to sleep with the sound of it

tapping outside your window still eases you


As October comes

Less attention is paid

It becomes ordinary


As soon as the excitement

for the first of the year came

That same excitement is gone

It’s just dark, all the time


The temperature drops

The nights lengthen

The drops thicken


The recycling of the year

brings the possibility of

the mundane becoming extraordinary

the clear becoming white


There is only

one maybe two

days where it solidifies


Then it just

turns right back

To rain


The author's comments:

This poem talks about the all of the various emotions that come with rain. It talks about the anticipation and excitement of the first rain drops of the fall, all the way through the year to when the rain turns into snow, then back again to rain. But most importantly, it adresses the feeling that acompaniees this constant thing, and how that feeling changes about rain as the seasons go by.


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