Love's Breath | TeenInk

Love's Breath

November 14, 2018
By VideolaRosa GOLD, Colonia, New Jersey
VideolaRosa GOLD, Colonia, New Jersey
15 articles 12 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all definitions hold their meaning."-Emma Nadella


This's

what I've waited for.

Not

like that Ave Marie.

What

I plan to do

I

can assure myself

Am

going to be fine.

"Don't

look between the line.

Listen

to the song of wine.

To

that you give your life."

Her 

blood has no trace

I'm

sure there's still space

Lost

within this old place

And

with the bloody mace

Alone

next to her dead lace.

She 

then took her last breath.

Stole 

all her presents,

My

love will be waiting

Home

where we live alone.

This

is my paradise.

Was

he to leave me too?

Supposed 

he had figured out?

To

that I will not say.

"Be 

the one who lives on",

My

mother would repeat.

Wedding 

was too great.

Day

by day I love him.


The author's comments:

Now, this piece will seem very creepy and sary to you as a reader. but I want you to now read every stanza that has only 1 word inside it as you would with a regular sentence. Just wanted to point this out in case you hadn't seen the little message I hid before you overlooked it and moved on.


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Mar. 21 2019 at 6:23 pm
VideolaRosa GOLD, Colonia, New Jersey
15 articles 12 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all definitions hold their meaning."-Emma Nadella

@pixiedust11 Thanks!

pixiedust11 said...
on Feb. 24 2019 at 5:47 pm
pixiedust11, Kingston, Georgia
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
my personal favorite quote would be " successful people begin where failures leave off " I find it very encouraging when I writing because I feel the need to strive for excellence and am challenged to soar above the clouds. Begin where others quit and I will surely have victory.

beautiful