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People Watching at Look Out Park

November 1, 2018
By abush4235 BRONZE, Saint Joseph, Michigan
abush4235 BRONZE, Saint Joseph, Michigan
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Today I saw a man in suspenders.

He had long black pants,

dress shoes,

and a white button-up shirt.


Perhaps he was attending his best friend’s wedding


Greased back,

his short black hair clung to his scalp.

Glancing into the mirror he smoothed

the stray strands back together.


Bending over he tied his shoe

and then the other.

He straightened his pants

and gave his shirt a tug.


Or maybe his great aunt’s funeral?


Acknowledging that everything was in place

he wandered to the edge of a bluff, hanging over the lake,

and put on his tie


Could he have been waiting on his date who was always running fifteen minutes late?


As he fiddled with the long piece of fabric

his eyes met the lake

and stayed there for quite some time.


Was he rehearsing the proposal he’s been planning for months?


He finished the knot and

placed his hands on his hips.

Eyes locking,

he stared past the seagulls.

Past the horizon.

Past the clouds and smog.


Could he be contemplating that job offer?


After a few minutes of gazing,

he strode back to his car and drove away.


I guess I’ll never know.


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem sitting in a parking lot on the bluff. I had been revising a different piece that took place in the same area and went to get some inspiration for better imagery. While I was sitting there, gazing at the lake, a very well dressed man caught my attention. I began to wonder why he would be so dressed up at such a casual location and wrote down my thoughts. 


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