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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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on Jan. 1 at 10:27 am
cadenceshurtz BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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I have LIVED this poem. My eyes were watering as I read it. The way it is written flows beautifully, the way the thoughts connect and kind of feed off of one another is flawless. AMAZING. I also love the back and forth between your heart's desire and the hard reality that is hard to face. SO RELATABLE to me! I needed this. Thank you.

on Dec. 15 2025 at 12:54 pm
abbistanley10, Marion, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no exquisite beauty without some strangeness in the proportion," - Edgar Allan Poe

this is so good lowk

justteona said...
on Nov. 24 2025 at 3:12 pm
justteona, Crestline, Ohio
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this is so beautiful

on Nov. 18 2025 at 10:37 am
crochetgirl25, Bell Air, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you are born to stand out

I love it! good job

4804169374 said...
on Nov. 6 2025 at 9:17 am
4804169374, Casselberry, Florida
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The poem is highly relatable due to its focus on universal themes of love, loss, and emotional conflict, which are central to the human experience. The speaker's vulnerability in describing the internal struggle between intense passion and the pain of a doomed relationship resonates with readers who have experienced similar dilemmas.

roshuna28 said...
on Oct. 22 2025 at 9:05 am
roshuna28, Orlando, Florida
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so the little story is simply talking about how they love this love one and whatever their going through it so hard for them because they trying to let go but they cant and i think i can relate to this story a little bit because it gives out a lot of emotions and how things really are .

roshuna28 said...
on Oct. 22 2025 at 9:03 am
roshuna28, Orlando, Florida
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.jeejiejdie

MidnightAura said...
on Sep. 29 2025 at 10:50 am
MidnightAura, Vishakapatnam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"When you sit with a nice girl for two hours you think it's only a minute. But when you sit on a hot stove for a minute you think it's two hours. That's relativity."<br /> Albert Einstein

this poem was so relatable of what exactly I am feeling ! such a beautiful poem!

on Sep. 25 2025 at 9:23 am
jewelianahernandez08, Winter Park, Florida
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This is do deep and well put i like how you go back a forth with how you want them but cant have them.

Trerolle said...
on Sep. 5 2025 at 1:08 pm
Trerolle, Orlando, Florida
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Such a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Bon-n1e said...
on Jul. 29 2025 at 6:25 pm
Bon-n1e, Southampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Someone loves everything you hate about yourself- <br /> Frank ocean

That was beautiful. I love writing love poems and I think you did this one amazingly

Ratnam-mani said...
on Jul. 24 2025 at 10:44 am
Ratnam-mani, Patna, Other
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a smell of true love comes from the piece of words you have given in every lines. i felt that it was me a long ago

Areleina said...
on Jul. 23 2025 at 12:34 pm
Areleina, Orangevale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay gold, Ponyboy"

Beautiful!

on Jun. 19 2025 at 7:25 am
InkAndMystery, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I do not burn to be seen — I burn to become.

pure emotion, i love it !

leisa01100 said...
on Apr. 11 2025 at 9:16 am
leisa01100, New York, New York
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beautiful, i love it.

on Apr. 3 2025 at 1:14 pm
FullyKnownFullyChosen, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"God can't give us peace and happiness apart from Himself because there is no such thing."--C.S. Lewis

i love this. it's so real. great job!

Alibug said...
on Mar. 31 2025 at 11:55 am
Alibug, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give in—never, never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty—never give in, except to convictions of honor and good sense."

Being in this place sucks! I know how you feel. This is so good!

asena7 said...
on Feb. 19 2025 at 11:00 pm
asena7, Dallas, Texas
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ughhh i love this sm, i love poetry that makes you feel like youre experiencing what you're reading, and this is it.

on Feb. 3 2025 at 4:04 pm
isabellaMyarbs, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“Why do I write? To understand the mystery of existence. To tolerate myself. To grow closer to everything that’s outside of me.” —Jhumpa Lahiri, In Other Words

This is very well done, not too long, not too short, very powerful. Great job

jackcuison said...
on Jan. 17 2025 at 12:27 pm
jackcuison, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"the unexamined life is not worth living" ~ socrates

this is perfect