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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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on Nov. 29 at 1:22 am
sarahshahzad BRONZE, Other, Other
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amazing words..!! I love to write as well, have my own poetry but this is realy amazing..

on Nov. 26 at 8:16 am
fatimahtuz-zahra BRONZE, England, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be pushed around by the fears in your mind.๐Ÿ–ค๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ–ค .Be led by the dreams in your heart.

this poem was awesome great job!๐Ÿ˜€

on Nov. 18 at 10:53 am
Makayla55555 BRONZE, Twin Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Act as if what you do makes a difference.
IT DOES."

This piece was wonderful

on Jun. 4 at 8:40 am
Isaiahwoodruff123, Newark, Delaware
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This poem was a lot better then expected good job !

Moejoe24 said...
on Jun. 3 at 10:44 am
Moejoe24, New York City, New York
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This is kinda cute

jenny-talia said...
on Jun. 3 at 8:27 am
jenny-talia, Penis, Idaho
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I like boys

lolawashere said...
on May. 31 at 1:26 pm
lolawashere, Shelton, Washington
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Love this

iloveme1011 said...
on Apr. 2 at 6:51 pm
iloveme1011, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Wow!! This is super romantic!!

TKS SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 at 9:45 am
TKS SILVER, Christiansburg, Virginia
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This piece is honestly a mood.

on Mar. 7 at 1:20 pm
marine6704 SILVER, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"/Friends are not just a relationship, or a book unwritten. its a BOND OVER TIME" Elisabeth Shinault

What a well written poem! You connect people with similiar experiences without even saying a specific experiences. Well you at least had me feel like I knew what was happening. Great job on the flow!

Kadin73 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 at 11:57 am
Kadin73 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"see, the night doth enfold us."
- Giacomo Puccini

Lovely darling. This is a deep poetic masterpiece. Reminds me of my Allpoetry days when I was writing deep poems.

on Feb. 26 at 10:23 am
Brookie-cookie BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I love this and hoe deep it is. It really is so relatable and brings up many feeling. I would really appreciate it if you could check out my work aswell, because I am a new writer. Thank you!

on Feb. 8 at 11:42 am
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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i can't express how this writing makes me feel a certain way. I love it so much, you're writing voice is truly beautiful. it would mean the world to me if you could read my writing and give me any feedback!! xoxo

on Feb. 5 at 1:40 pm
lindseypeoples BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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i love how this poem just flows... it isn't wrote in a way that is too pretty its fake. it is real and super good !

on Jan. 24 at 7:40 am
iamcloudyeyes SILVER, Spokane Valley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
we are like human beings
used to be before they became
too civilized to enjoy themselves
- Don Marquis, The Lesson of the Moth

It really be that way.
I feel for this on a whole level, if I am being serious.
Wonderfully written.

on Jan. 10 at 10:37 am
Lilsis14567 BRONZE, Cohoes, New York
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i know how you feel i have been through the same thing and it really hurts you in the end but stay strong

on Dec. 21 2018 at 4:10 pm
PrincessWoof PLATINUM, Rock Rapids, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday everything will make perfect sense. So, for now, laugh at the confusion, smile through the tears, and keep reminding yourself that everything happens for a reason." - Art Thomas

I've been there too. Stay strong!

on Dec. 14 2018 at 11:17 am
kristjanscott BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Atticus,he was real nice...."

"Most people are,sout,when you finally see them"

-To Kill A Mockingbird,HAPPER LEE

so deep

on Dec. 11 2018 at 7:12 pm
suga_yoongi_agustd SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
we fight each day, a never ending battle, life is the butcher, and we are the cattle

omg I know exactly how u feel

KarMoon BRONZE said...
on Nov. 30 2018 at 9:52 pm
KarMoon BRONZE, Culpeper, Virginia
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I have never experienced a heartbreak to this extent but I could truly feel your pain in this. So sorry you have to go through something like that. Hopefully things are better now. Love this.


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