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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Aug. 21 2010 at 7:44 am
HOPEfully SILVER, Clayton, North Carolina
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My Cinderella. She is real. She exists. I pray for her constantly. May God satisfy the desires of her heart, draw her close, consume her. May He claim her passions, her identity, her refuge, her hopes, her strengths and weaknesses -Adam Young

adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 21 2010 at 12:08 am
loves2write95, Uradouche, Massachusetts
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\"I am not bound to please thee with my answer.\"- William Shakespeare

so good! so true as well.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:04 pm
madilyne BRONZE, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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being diffrent is one of the best things i have ever done with my life

this really made me cry, i love it

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:24 pm
splinterstar BRONZE, Arcadia, California
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This poem is such whimsical romantic genius. Sort of like those cute innocent poems we read in elementary, but with a reality twist. Keep writing!!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:11 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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I love this, it has a nice flow

on Aug. 9 2010 at 3:32 pm
This poem is amazing. Keep on writing! (:

on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:46 am
tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Plot is character revealed by action.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Aristotle

i really love this poem i have had and sorta still have someone like this but not really

on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:28 am
i feel the same way that exact thing happened to me and if u look at my profile picture it will be the one who done it to me  but over all i realy loved ur poem there so many things that happpen like that now these days

on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:17 pm
Sammmmmmmm GOLD, Jefferson, Maryland
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Strength is hard to get, and easy to use<br /> Don&#039;t leave the ones you love for the ones you like ; they, too, will leave you for the ones they love

i feel the complete same.!

on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:19 am
KelseyForLife SILVER, Moline, Illinois
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Live Life to the fullest. &lt;33

This is great. i love how it had some rhyme words in it. great job

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:07 pm
loveibanez BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on!&quot; -Ben Franklin

I just had to comment on this one. It is perfectly stated, simple, and I love it. I know you have gotten a million comments, but I just wanted to say nice job, and I know how you feel!

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on Jul. 31 2010 at 5:16 am
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this is a very nice way to describe what most of us feel :) good job!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:47 pm
nikka12345678999 BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
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hold fast to dreams for if dreams die life is a broken wing bird that cannot fly

this is sooo awsome...wow it relates to mainly every girl

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:24 pm
chocolatkiss1013 SILVER, New York, New York
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But paradise is locked and bolted, we must make a journey around the world to see if a backdoor has perhaps been left open

i love how its sad but still makes you want to smile 

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:00 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it.&quot; -Oscar Wilde

This is a collage of kind of sad, cute, funny, and sweet all at once. Very unique and something that makes you smile:) good job!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:19 pm
Annika-Katryn SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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&quot;Thou art my life, my love, my heart, <br /> The very eyes of me: <br /> And hast command of every part <br /> To live and die for thee.&quot;<br /> -Robert Herrick

it makes me laugh, in an semi-sad way. thank you.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
emmacxoxo PLATINUM, Chelsea, Massachusetts
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Okay. Okay.

this was absolutely amazinggg...it had alot of emotion

on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:37 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

This is great I really like it Your very talented.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:05 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

I looovveeedd this poem. nice way with words btw

on Jul. 30 2010 at 11:43 am
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
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Keep your feet on the ground, When your head&#039;s in the clouds.

I love this! It flows really well. And it's funny. :)

It makes me want to read more of your writing...If there is more. haha