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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Sep. 21 2011 at 6:40 pm
FilmNut1138 BRONZE, Baker, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today"-James Dean

This is a great poem. But also aggravated me as well as reading the comments. As a guy, I am extremely passionate about the fact that all guys are jerks. Not all guys are jerks, and from my experience, girls just seem to enjoy being mistreated I guess. I have had it with girls who claim all guys are jerks, but they actually are just too blind to see that out of all the non-jerks surrounding her, she always goes for the one that looks like he could be the biggest jerk. Sometimes I actually think girls rate guys by their jerkiness. It disgusts me when I see guys that have no idea how to treat a girl always has a girlfriend, yet the ones that ARE caring and know what their doing are always left out in the cold. People really need to open their eyes and see it's them and not everyone else.

WinterEyes said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 6:21 pm
WinterEyes, Lakewood, Colorado
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I can totally relate to this poem. I loved it

Aurelie SILVER said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 5:56 pm
Aurelie SILVER, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm dying of boredom. Or maybe just dying" -Megan Whalen Turner

The biggest jerk in the world, but also the cutest. The problems we girls face haha

mc12 said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 11:10 am
I can really relate

skinny minny said...
on Sep. 18 2011 at 9:57 pm
i liked this poem

on Sep. 18 2011 at 12:17 pm
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't help others, if you yourself need help" -my sister ;) love it!

that is SO clever!!!  i like a guy and he's a jerk... but he is an AMAZING jerk!  i dont know how he does it! who here agrees???

jaque1995 said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:38 am
i love this poem :) its amazing

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Sep. 15 2011 at 12:18 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

i am in love with this poem it is amazing! i feel you:)

TevoRocks said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 5:48 pm
LOVE IT i love how you started nice then BAM!!!!!

on Sep. 14 2011 at 12:35 pm
Daydreamer4ever, Eugene, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
The trouble with trouble is that it usually starts out as fun.

I love this poem.I fell in love with alot of  jerks.lol.

on Sep. 14 2011 at 9:47 am
I love this it is really good......... o by the way i canged my profile name from crazycatlady to purple hue

on Sep. 13 2011 at 3:23 pm
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on Sep. 13 2011 at 12:12 pm
Oh yah this is a great poem;)

on Sep. 13 2011 at 11:58 am
This is a nice poem it actually informing about the relation ship that a person had with another person great! :)

JA cob said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:27 am
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Tyrome said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
You made a nice poem

tyron babee said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
Beast poem swaggdummies here

undone said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 9:00 am
undone, Dfhfhjgtyiuj, Wyoming
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I love this poem and its so true its like that with most guys this poem is great!!! :)

panda97 said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 10:05 am

i think this poem meant alot i cant get over how i says a girl can klike someone so much but at he same time think hes a jerk beware girls boys hva that power

 


Poe(: said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 10:04 am
I've fell inlove with so many jerks I like this poems its great!!