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My Friend

July 23, 2011
By praveen.Trichy PLATINUM, Thirchy, Other
praveen.Trichy PLATINUM, Thirchy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
cruel leaders are replaced only to turn other leaders cruel


When I have some problem
He is the one to listen to me,
Since he always advises me,
it helps me vent.

When I think about the failure
He shines on me to give me hope,
And he consoles me saying,'in my steps
I must have confidence'.

He shares his sorrow and
good things with me
That happen to him in his house,
And in the school.

He makes me look at my lacks
When I commit a mistake,
It never gives me the back
When I ask for a favor him.

Though the time separates us,
The memories console us.
And if the distance is far
that is not important what happens.

Since we are best friends,
And our friendship is strong
like the gentle dew of dawn
It is what keeps us close.

He is my sincere friend
And my more faithful companion,
He who guards my secrets
And it can understand me.

He who says to me "he relies on me"
He is my best friend.


The author's comments:
Thinking about the old friends,past relation ship,time i spent on chatting,fighting,playing,dancing with my friends.....those days will never come back

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on Jan. 15 2012 at 6:00 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

Very sweet poem =) 4/5

monaa said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 12:34 pm
NYC 1 YAR!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:24 am
praveen.Trichy PLATINUM, Thirchy, Other
25 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
cruel leaders are replaced only to turn other leaders cruel

thanks....

on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:43 am
praveen.Trichy PLATINUM, Thirchy, Other
25 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
cruel leaders are replaced only to turn other leaders cruel

Thanks dude....i red your poems and i like your poem'MORE THAN WHAT YOU SEE'......IT'S SO NICE.....

zone7294 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:54 pm
zone7294 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
If im good for nothing, then your bad for everything

this is an awesome poem maybe you can check out some of my poems

on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:24 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

I can tell this came from your heart and you probably had a very strong and focused friendship. Truthfully a nice and excellent way to explain it. ^_^