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Tears Flow Down

November 22, 2010
By Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Tears Flow Down
at a gentle pace
leaving streaks
apon my face

Tears Flow Down
this is all your fault
now our "love"
has come to a hault

Tears Flow Down
now i feel terrible
why dose love have to be
so unberrible?

Tears Flow Down
i love you again
what type of stuff
goes through my head?


The author's comments:
Boys.... thats all i can say

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Maddy_D SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 2:53 pm
Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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IZZY!!! i love you so much<3 your screen name gives away your identity! haha and thank you<333

on Apr. 30 2011 at 2:57 pm
madddy i love you and your poems!! guess who this is :)

Maddy_D SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 6:35 pm
Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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hi. i actually didnt spell anything wrong 4 some reason when i put quotation marks it messed up the spelling and stuff :( ...... but when i say "what type of stuff goes through my head" im trying to say that i dont get why i like a kid even though hes mean 2 me.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 9:54 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

The ending was a little bit confusing (what do you mean by "what type of stuff goes through my head"?) and you spelled a few things wrong. I get the point though.