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Eternal Embrace

January 9, 2010
By Ghost. BRONZE, Wesley Chapel., Florida
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Ghost. BRONZE, Wesley Chapel., Florida
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As I lay in my bed, my body is numb.
She is gone she is dead, I just wish death would come.
They say not to cry, that the blame’s not on me.
But I know it’s a lie, and it is plane to see.
She was the one, the love of my life.
Our life had just begun, she was my future wife.
As death slowly arrives, I can see her smiling face.
We’re no longer alive, but locked in our eternal embrace

© Elaine S., Phoenix, AZ

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I wrote this from the veiwpoint of the character in my short story.
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Pyroc BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 10:05 am
Pyroc BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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I like this poem it's very deep especially if it's from the viewpoint of a fictional character. P.S. thanks for the comment I have another one on here
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:11 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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I would also just like to say that, I'M THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!!!
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:10 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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I like it A LOT!!!!! :)