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Hush , its mine!

March 14, 2009
By phavi1995 SILVER, Sacramento, California
phavi1995 SILVER, Sacramento, California
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Keep it silent, its forbidden
To everyone but me
My thoughts, my feelings
No one can ever see
My secret, only mine
Something I can't tell,
To anyone but me.
Nosey frauds and savage lies,
Haunt the existence of these.
I wish to keep them mine
I can't tell anyone
No one to trust,
Not my diary, nor my'hush
A bubbly feeling,
When there is a flaw
Very close to being revealed
I should keep it safe
From anyone sane
Once so close to be exposed
I hid it deep within me,
I should keep it safe
Its mine,
It marks my existence,
It makes it me
Everyone has a secret
So'. hush

The author's comments:
This is how I feel when I have a secret.

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Sathes said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 8:34 am
Sathes, Coimbatore, Other
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Nice poem phavi..............

Croat_1993 said...
on May. 2 2009 at 2:38 pm
I know this writer. Its a close friend of mine. I like her poetry very much, and so this song, too. keep on hoping...

ff5fan SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 1:29 am
ff5fan SILVER, Loganville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Let us so live that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry.
-Mark Twain

wow i really like this one! great work and keep it up!:)

Brett95 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 10:58 pm
Brett95 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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wow this is really good... i like it!!!

on Apr. 8 2009 at 2:24 pm
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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This is a really cool idea, and has really interesting feelings that one doesn't encounter all the time, like love or jealousy or other things that lots of people write poems about. Two things: I'd check your grammar, and try to put some punctuation in there. It would make your poem easier to read. I adore the "hush" repetend.