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Judging Me

February 28, 2009
By Bianca GOLD, New York, New York
Bianca GOLD, New York, New York
19 articles 0 photos 4 comments

I dare not speak
I dare not blink
I dare not move
I dare not breathe

Everything I do
Is wrong.
Everything I say
Is incorrect
Everything I see
Isn't there
Everything I am
Is mistaken for
Everything I'm not.

Judged wrongly
Accused of not
Being worthy

I am nothing but a mistake
I am everything People believe
I'm not

A problem with This
I've never had.
I am who i am
My own life is my
Created plan

I speak no words
For My face says it all
My Eyes do not move
For they say what my lips do not
I Move on and up
Others can't stop me
I breathe and i live
Even when everyone expects me not to

I am judged
I am Believed to be
But no one in this world
Knows the real me
I just wish
That before you speak
You get to know me

Im imperfect
Yet I live
I am anger
But I forgive
I am nothing and everything
I am nothing like you
I am everything Like me
I am perfect anonymity

Put Simply
I am Me

The author's comments:
I wrote this while i was really angry.. everyone always seem to come down really hard on me even though im only 15 i do make mistakes and i admit it cause im aware of it..i just wish that before people make a decision about who they think i am they would ask me who i think i am.... I hate being judged because no one knows what im going through...i just wanted that to be known

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on Mar. 15 2010 at 3:27 pm
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
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This was so good! I loved the conclusion, the last lines say it all: "I am nothing like you/I am everything like me/I am perfect anonynity/put simply/I am Me"

on Nov. 4 2009 at 11:33 am
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a a reason "

yyayyy iloveit yay i feel special im one of ur fave ppl wooot wooot