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Fencing Anthem

February 25, 2016
By MariaCeleste BRONZE, Hickory Corners, Michigan
MariaCeleste BRONZE, Hickory Corners, Michigan
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This is how you lose a war:

    you seek stillness
    you fold to all the card games inside your chest
    you build up cold stone walls
     and compress all the air in your lung
     into silence.
    you count seconds until timeless
    you wait
    you hate violence.
This is how you win it, and more:
    you remember your liquid bones
     and the quintessential fluidity
    you employ when flowing from sitting
     to standing
     to flying through the air
     a hundred errands on your mind
     a million questions for your destination
    you find that soul-organ Aristotle missed 
     and when you seek stillness
     let it be for wisdom
     only.
    you hear the spinal hiss of kissing blades
     from sitting to standing to fighting
    you count seconds as moments and wait
      for only the right moment
     to strike.
That is how you win a fight.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece mentally after losing a fencing match. In reality, you'd never have time to find yourself in the poetical sense during a match. You only have time to concentrate on what's happening as it's happening. I only learned fencing for about 12 weeks, and this piece is honestly the most long-lived thing that came from it. Hopefully, readers will feel that sense of calm that comes after the nervous tension, and enjoy the imagery.


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