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Hope.......

March 25, 2015
By pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.


Future is invisible, as can just be felt,
There;s no hope for us, to get up tomorrow in bed.
Noone's seen future but that's a hope,
We plan our tomorrow, not knowing the difficulties knock.
After falling, there's left a hope,
To rise up again, without sesing anyone's hand for help.
Hope is nothing but just a trust, which we have in God,
And in us.....
No one admires that invisible power, but always remember him,
In the needy hour.
That's hope, that's trust, we have in us.
We don't feel, don't accept, that hoping and trusting's a human aspect.
No one belives, no one knows,
That the humanity we have, is other's hope.
The unrevealed truth is that, our hope is others humaity,
and indirectly, others humanity becomes our hope........


The author's comments:

When nothing there, there comes a hope, in the darkest places, there's a light. Just like that human has a feeling which never goes.........


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on May. 20 2015 at 3:55 am
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.

Fanfiction, I did not write this poem intentionally. lol The idea came when I got frustrated with my surroundings, so it all ended up with a mess:D I'll rectify and post it soon! Thanks for your right judgement.

on May. 15 2015 at 10:04 am
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.

Thanks Lotus for understanding my idea!

on May. 15 2015 at 9:58 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

Look, there may be grammatical and punctuation errors, but that's not necessarily the point. The meaning is behind it all, regardless of punctuation and grammar. Sure, it would have been nice if it was proofread before posting (that's kinda on you, @Pikachulover) but if you look passed that, you can see what was meant.

on Apr. 29 2015 at 4:01 pm
Fanfiction13 PLATINUM, Somewhere, Other
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There's no fame without fans.

The poem is a mess. There are grammatical errors everywhere and you bring up hope, god, and the future all in a jumbled mess of nonsense.