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She Was

February 4, 2015
By RedPhoenix SILVER, Boone, North Carolina
RedPhoenix SILVER, Boone, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you can, with what you have, where you are."

~Teddy Roosevelt


"And then they realized. She was not a girl. She was a canvas.
       A canvas made of sunsets and pianos, oceans and words.
                  Imperfection splotches of colors like a rainbow made of eternity
                                                                                                                      she was the mountains and the sky with wings made of coffee and gold.
       she was a voice, quiet, no, a riot.
       she was humble. she was not. she was confident by choice and arrogant by default.
    she was a painting, a song.
she was a deep breath, a psychotic break.
        A potent mixture of joy and sorrow, memory and magic.
She was, if you will, a dog and a cat.
       The canvas that she was, so simple, so intricate -
Understandable and misunderstood, like a child so old.
         the colors of her soul
painted the wind and the earth.
       She was a human.
Not a girl.
                A human, awash with
beauty
              and life.


The author's comments:

This is a poem about every girl. 


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on Feb. 20 2015 at 9:18 pm
RedPhoenix SILVER, Boone, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you can, with what you have, where you are."

~Teddy Roosevelt

Thanks so much!!

embura BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 9:21 am
embura BRONZE, Northview, South Dakota
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will not live forever because I cannot live forever and if I could live forever then I would live forever, but since I cannot live forever then I will not live forever.

It was beautiful !!!!!

HammadWaseem said...
on Feb. 7 2015 at 12:39 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.
-Eminem

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!
-Mask

Thats nice! btw will you comment and rate on my video? :) TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer