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Need Love?

December 31, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
8 articles 24 photos 51 comments

See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:06 am
Thats very intense like woah!!!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:03 am
I know how you feel giiiiirl! life is short you gotta LIVE girl! LIVE!

life4 said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 9:53 am
It's very good because most teens can actually connect to ir i just love your peom

Hideing BRONZE said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 7:46 pm
Hideing BRONZE, Okc, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"We need to stop acting like our own dreams are the only thing that matters"
-ed-fullmetal alchemist

This is how i feel

on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:57 pm
sweetheart220, Phx, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
better to be loved and loss then to be never loved at all

i thought i found my "true love" but there is no such thing as "true love"

 


on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:33 pm
Silently_Outspoken, Hurst, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"We hide ourselves in our music to reveal ourselves."
-Jim Morrison

This is amazing!! I love the "Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead, and replace it with a kiss." Really beautiful writing. Would you mind looking at my poem? It's my first one that's been posted and I would love some feedback.

smile123 said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 8:56 pm
its hard to belive wat u see in movies becuz its acting. all thought out in there mind and then written onto paper. they do something every1 can belive in or have had an close expereance to what they have written

on Sep. 13 2011 at 7:29 pm
MariaPanasuk BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
4 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not you, its me, I deserve better.

:O I love it!

Nerdy BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 7:25 pm
Nerdy BRONZE, Rutland, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
life is short so live it to the fullest

i love this poem its really good

on Sep. 13 2011 at 4:34 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

Awesone job! I know how you feel. I need love too! :) Keep writing!

on Sep. 13 2011 at 3:45 pm
Shortiie16 BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
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This is by far one of the best poems I've read so far,. Keep up with the good work.

Anita said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 11:57 am
Awwe that's sad sometimes we love but aren't loved sweet poem Loved it!!!!!!!!

Karen kidds said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 11:57 am
This Is A Good Poem It Has A Deep Thought.It Makes You Feel What It's Saying! It has emotion

lili said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:15 am
i need some lovin!!

on Sep. 13 2011 at 9:28 am
literateViolet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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great poem love is such a cotradiction and at times i feel like this too this is now one of my fav poems oh love why cant you be easy to obtain

on Aug. 22 2011 at 6:38 pm
its.just.kc BRONZE, Fort Campbell, Kentucky
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Wow, fantastic. I think almost EVERYONE feels like that once in awhile! Love it!!

on Jul. 31 2011 at 6:50 pm
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
4 articles 3 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

wow. its like you knew exactly what is going on in my head. you put in down in writing. it unmastakably beautiful words. i cnat express how much i love this poem. i think it is fantastic.

on Jul. 31 2011 at 7:25 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

>>>Wanting love, not being planned or create a thought to love. But, wanting love, happening to get a new feeling

on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:33 pm
Julez1D1 BRONZE, Kingsport, Tennessee
1 article 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But unfortunatley all I have to give you is in imperfect heart, but it's a heart that beats only for you."

You pretty much spoke my thoughts. (:

on Jul. 21 2011 at 3:05 pm
polyprincess16 SILVER, Tracy, California
7 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. ~Eleanor Roosevelt

I can relate to the need for a pure love that you can never seem to find, and the sadness that comes with not having that kind of love...