Broken | Teen Ink


January 2, 2009
By Charlie Evans, Allen, TX

my heart is broken
my heart is dead
you were outspoken
i replyed enough said

my mind is longing
my mind is gone
no feeling of belonging
was i just a pawn

my soul is aching
my soul is sad
and then awaking
what a nightmare i had

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on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:10 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is beautiful!! Keep writing.. =) check out some of my work IF you wanna.. =)

justsillyme said...
on Jan. 8 2009 at 4:41 pm
Wow, this is very short but very descriptive. I like how you captured the feeling in just a few short lines. Nice work!

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