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First Kiss

May 7, 2008
By yasmin moftakhar, West Chester, OH

I will always remember
The first time we kissed
We had no school on that snowy day.
I came to kidnap you with a smile on my face,
We talked for what seemed like hours.
Before I left: that’s when it happened.

It was an amazing kiss
Which made my whole day.
Our relationship went on for a while before it happened.
I got to know you over many hours
I wonder if you remember
The first day I spoke to you face to face.

Back then I would close my eyes and see your face.
Replaying everything that had happened.
You leaned in and there it was; my first kiss
When I think of that day
I recall the feeling I felt for hours and hours
I will always remember.

It seemed like hours
When the smile finally wore off my face.
Six weeks that I will always remember,
You were my very first kiss,
So many wonderful days,
So many things happened.

Looking back now, it seems so long ago, those wonderful days,
It’s the good times that I will always remember
A plethora of hours
Spent with a smile on my face
I can’t believe that you and I actually happened,
Everything, even the kiss.

In the future, many things will happen,
Many more memories made, even more hours,
Many new beautiful faces
Moments my heart will always remember
Even more kisses
But what you and I had was amazing, we had some very special days.


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on Nov. 28 2010 at 8:31 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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This is so beautiful, love it!!

Kiana_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 5:40 pm
Kiana_M BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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I really love it =)

It reminds me of my first kiss too, and it happened recently. That's what drew me to the poem.

I love how it flows, you make it sound really really well.

Good job, keep writing =) You have a talent.

- Kiana, (Do you mind rating my latest poem? =/)

on Jun. 25 2009 at 9:54 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

cute poem!

Amber1994 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2009 at 12:04 am
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
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omigosh i can totally relate! this happened to me! but it was my 2nd kiss.

on May. 17 2009 at 7:38 pm
KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"There are a millions guys who will try to pick you up but only one can sweep you off your feet!" -Emily Illingworth

Cute poem... and tottaly ture, but maybe a little more honesty could have imporved it and made it even more amazing! Check out 11:11 Memories, its my break up poem! Awesome job! :)

on Jan. 15 2009 at 10:52 pm
amazing poem!!!

loveyou101 said...
on Aug. 7 2008 at 5:05 pm
omigosh!! this poem is so cute! it reminds me of my first kiss! i love your poem so much! GREAT JOB :D


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