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the end of tomorrow

October 22, 2014
By dastal127 BRONZE, Andrews, Texas
dastal127 BRONZE, Andrews, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Unless someone like you cares a whole lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not.
Dr. Seuss, the lorax
SHUT UP MEG---peter griffin


You feel sin.
Like the prick of a pin.
You have to bend
Cause you don’t know when it’ll end.
You may be meek
But your outlook is bleak.
You wait in sorrow
For the end of tomorrow.
You don’t know why
You try to cry.
They pick on you till the end
You wonder why it had to be your friend.
You can’t take it anymore
Crimson red stains the floor.
As you lie there crying
You wonder where you will go by dying.


The author's comments:

i got this from personal experience


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on Oct. 28 2014 at 12:03 pm
authoress17 SILVER, Evans City, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If there is no such thing as magic...then what is writing?."-authoress17 (me)

Very nice. I really enjoyed your piece. Good luck in your journey through poetry.

on Oct. 27 2014 at 10:28 am
dastal127 BRONZE, Andrews, Texas
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Unless someone like you cares a whole lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not.
Dr. Seuss, the lorax
SHUT UP MEG---peter griffin

thank you very much it was my first real poem.

on Oct. 27 2014 at 9:46 am
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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oh wow nice piece you got here :-D its nicely penned and with an interesting yet sad story within the poem. nice job!