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Pieces

November 2, 2008
By savannah-jane PLATINUM, Soooomers., New York
savannah-jane PLATINUM, Soooomers., New York
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Paint splatters

against the blank

canvas

splashing the

page

with all the

anger

leaving the

bad

behind on a

masterpiece

stare back at it

RIP IT

to pieces

Leave

the memories behind

Pieces

of hate, of

anger,

of bad

memories

ripped to

P

I

E

C

E

S.


The author's comments:
My name is Savannah and I am thirteen years young. I think I first discovered my passion for writing a couple years ago, maybe when I was nine. I couldn't stop writing stories!
I grew out of the story writing phase, though, only last year. I became very aware of poetry and started writing tons of it, journals and journals full! I'm just really hoping to pursue writing as a career one day. I've never wanted anything more.

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Liss said...
on Nov. 16 2008 at 10:52 pm
OMG!!!! It was really well written! I loved your comments on this poem...it was also really well written and it really showed your passion for writing poetry!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!