My Young Little John | Teen Ink

My Young Little John

February 4, 2013
By JulesRo GOLD, Waco, Texas
JulesRo GOLD, Waco, Texas
14 articles 2 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
*We are the music makers... and we are the dreamers of dreams." - Willy Wonka


Pain and Regret is what’s left in me,
Nothing can make me happy as you can see.

Revenge fills my empty head,
No happy thought but sadness instead.

Kindness come back, Rudeness be gone,
Oh why were you taken from me, my young little John?

You were just 5 and I was just 10,
When you were taken from me by some evil men.

My heart is cold, and my spirits are low.
Will I ever see you again? I do not know.

I’ll pray to god while you’re gone,
Just please be careful, my young little John.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this because i see that people loose someone everyday somewhere in the world. So I thought to myself,"what would it be like to loose someone?" And so I tried to answer that question, thinking about what a person who has lost someone, might feel emotionaly.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


Enderman GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 5:43 pm
Enderman GOLD, No, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no monster greater than a lack of compassion."


-Master Splinter, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles

One more thing to add: The "g" in God should be capitalized!  And also could you rate some of my work, I can't get anything but views!

Enderman GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2013 at 6:01 pm
Enderman GOLD, No, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no monster greater than a lack of compassion."


-Master Splinter, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles

Although it is EXTREMELY sad, I have to say that I absolutely LOVE, no ADORE, this poem!!!!!  Excellent job with this!!!