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A Death Written in the Stars

January 9, 2013
By Kayla Olson BRONZE, Mount Horeb, Wisconsin
Kayla Olson BRONZE, Mount Horeb, Wisconsin
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The pyre burns starkly
Off of the shore, where onyx waves crash
And flames flicker shadows
Over grains of sand that shift at the zephyr’s touch.

Off of the shore, where onyx waves crash
The pebbles pop, growing into boulders that roll
Over grains of sand that shift at the zephyr’s touch.
Lonely Achilles’ tears flood the ground as they catch fire.

The pebbles pop, growing into boulders that roll
Brightly from the air, deep down on Earth.
Lonely Achilles’ tears flood the ground as they catch fire
Crying and screaming in whistles up above a crowd.

Brightly from the air, deep down on Earth
Patroclus searches the sky from the window of his shuttle
Crying and screaming in whistles up above a crowd.
He smiles as the constellations grow near.


The author's comments:
Over the course of my lifetime I've always loved reading ancient mythology and the like. Included is Homer's "The Illiad", which, along with the concept of mythology being recorded in constellations, has inspired this poem; specifically it surrounds the death, and abstract meeting, of the friends Patroclus and Achilles, who both face untimely ends.

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