I agree. The idea behind this poem is great, but these minor mistakes should be fixed. 

Very good, VERY good! It is moving, but simple, and about something important, too.  I rated two stars though. NOT BECAUSE I THINK IT"S BAD!!!! Its just, it isn't as good as it could be. There seems to be many typos and words missing, and "Flag/gag",  rhymes are a bit cheesy. The lines that rhyme "Sick/tick," are... well. Not cheesy, but inconsistant, sorta. Something annoying you like a tick, and somthing disgusting you are on whole different levels. there is nothing wrong with that, but you don't use the feircer phrase, then follow it by downgrade it with something that isn't as strong. Swap em around, maybe? "Those people annoy me like a tick/ No, they make me downright sick!" Something like that. It is a good poem, but it dosen't seem ready to be submitted yet. I might tack it down, fix the spelling and anything else I felt needed it, then resubmit it. Especially with the typo in the title