Thanks for the advice. I've been stuck lately and this might help my writers block :)

Okay this is pretty good. But this is something I want to say about all your poetry in general is that you are never going to get past adjectives like "pretty good"  "nice" "pleasent to read" if you don't dig deeped with your topics, Just trying to write a poem about big topics you know, "love" "music" "sadness" and then just trying to describe thme in general  isn't going to get you very far. You have to look deeper inside yourself, and write about your blood and guts and all the complexity and harrowing glory that is human emotion. You have to take whatever is going on in your soul and transfer it to the pen. You have the writing style you just need to get deeper with your ideas. Try to write whenever you feel a really intensely about something and let it flow through you- that's when the magic happens. 

This is really good!