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Taking Over

July 27, 2012
By sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends come and friends go, but a true friend sticks by you like family.

This evil makes it so hard
No matter what is the card
I try to push it away
So I don't listen to what it has to say
But it seems stuck to me
And won't let me be
This evil is strong
And makes me do wrong
It's arms are near
And that's what I fear
I hear all these lies
When I ask so many whys
I sit in the dark
There is a distant bark
Trees waver around
Branches make a hissing sound
Things have moved
All love was removed
Red eyes stare back at me
Is that really what I see
Am I loosing my mind
When is my life going to be realigned
What have I done
Has the devil won
Thoughts scramble in my head
As I lay in bed
Sleep does not take
I'm always awake
Try to talk
And I'll just walk
I can't keep telling you my secrets
They all lead up to regrets
I'm locking myself inside
It's me who you can't confide
I'm nothing but a monster
I'm an attempter
The evilness inside me
Is what I try not to be

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This article has 4 comments.

on Oct. 3 2012 at 10:41 am
ShannonLil99 GOLD, Ongar, Other
10 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Why should I care what other people think of me? I am who I am. And who I wanna be.'

- Avril Lavigne

Really cool :P Keep on writing :) x

on Aug. 28 2012 at 11:28 pm
pinkietoeshoes PLATINUM, Glen Rock, New Jersey
21 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can
life is what you make it

This is really good!!!!

on Jul. 29 2012 at 1:16 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

Very good! 5 stars for sure!

Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 1:05 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is a good poem, it shows the conflict of a person to try to not be evil, so good job with this poem! :D