I Feel the Wind in My Hair

July 27, 2008
By AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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Blessed by God,
Touched by light,
Spirits roam
In the night.

They can see,
With their hearts,
When to come,
When to part.

Time may come,
Time may go,
But the wind
Still must blow.

Thank you, Lord,
For your care.
I feel the wind
In my hair.


The author's comments:
Thank you, God. Amen.

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on Sep. 19 2009 at 9:59 am
haileewrites SILVER, Clark, New Jersey
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I lost the game.

I totally agree with all of you i love readign and both of your work amazes me! Keep it up!

on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:54 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

o thanks okay i thought i had said something! i hoped not cuz ur so cool! it's a relief to know i didn't! and thanks!

on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:52 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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i totally agree! i read all your stuff but i kept forgetting to comment :( i really love all of it, especially fear, and love is my favorite. i love the analogy of the knife.... it is beautiful. i rated them all, but b/c i kept forgetting 2 comment, i hope this makes up for it. :)

on Sep. 10 2009 at 6:55 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this is beyond explanation or complementation ( if the last one is even a word)!!!!!!!! please write more so i can read it. half the fun of being a writer is being a reader.

sammy said...
on Aug. 13 2008 at 1:55 pm
another amazing poem! peace!


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