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My Other Half

May 2, 2012
By n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

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Althougj i cant see you
I can hear you
Taunting and laughing
Constantly harassing-
You're my other half
The half who isn't sure whether to cry or laugh,
Whether or not to go on
Only living what others want.

© Seita O., Palatine, IL

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n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2013 at 10:06 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

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Thank you.I think secetly alot of people can understand this one. 
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER said...
on May. 27 2012 at 8:32 pm
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Time and the bell have buried the day,<br /> The black cloud carries the sun away&quot; - Elliot<br /> <br /> Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn&#039;t know we had one. - Into the Woods

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 I like this, I sort of connect to it. (Though it's complicated) It's very well written and straight foward . Please check out my article Snapdragons (and anything else if they ever get approved..sigh)